Wednesday 30 July 2014

Story writing

We have been learning about adjectives and writing 'wow' words to make our stories more interesting. We have written some great descriptions of birds and whales with a buddy ( we call it - think, pair, share). Here are the pictures and our descriptions........




The owl is flying through the wind. The snow owl is awesome!

The whale looks like he's flying but he's jumping through the air.
By Mitchell and Olivia.



The snow owl is flying amazingly through the air.
He is as white as snow.
The whale looks like it is flying with wings and it is kind of flying like a flying fish.
By George and Bella

The snow owl is flying through the air with his amazing wings. He is white and brown. By Axel

The whale has an amazing fin and rainbow skin. He is enormous with amazing blue eyes. By Mimi and Axel



The humongous whale is splashing and crashing through the water. It sprays air and water out of the hole on his body.
The bird is a wonderful snow owl and it's body is white. The owl is handsome and cool and can fly anywhere.
By Charlie and Flynn

The enormous stunning shiny blue whale is splashing like it's flying. It is wonderful and awesome as it's jumping and splashing around the rocks.
The wonderful snow owl with a white body is flying through the wind very high.
By Luca and Bel



The amazing whale is a mammal and the biggest animal on earth. It looks like it is flying and is going to make a big splash!!! It is enormous and is splashing up and down.
The snow owl is amazing and pretty as it is flying through the air. It is fantastic!
By Poppy and Jett

The whale is jumping beautifully out of the water. He is splashing through the water very fast.
The wonderful bird is flying sneakily through the sky. She is flying around the world really fast.
By Bobby and India

The whale is a beautiful animal. It can stay under water for a long time. It has a hole on its back for air and water. The whale is jumping like a flying fish.
The wonderful owl is flying around the hills very fast. He is as white as snow and very pretty.
By Leon and Meika




Location:Room 4

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